I feel that three of the above four pieces are coming along ok. The fourth, at bottom right, just ain’t working. It’s also the most heavily worked. And yet it’s still not happening. Still, three out of four isn’t bad, is it?
The top two I really like. I think they’re going in the right direction. The third, at bottom left… it’s kind of teetering on the brink.
LATER ON…
Further work on the top right still not really helping.
Hmmm… The top two, which I like best out of this lot anyway, also work very strongly inverted. I’ll prob’ develop these designs further both ways up.